Hi Sally,
I think this report was quite well written, just a few comments on how you could improve it further.
In the introduction, perhaps you could provide a litte more detail on the project scope and what others in the team are doing and how they link to your role eg: Dean. Then in the findings you could talk about the tasks you and Dean are working on together.
The conclusion could be stronger, I like the positive attitude but I would like to more concise details about what needs to be done.
Regards,
Anne Molloy
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